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w h y w o u l d i l i e ? by ~lemonlust:iconlemonlust:





My invisible fingers
strangling, scratching, hating her.
Hating her face, her
words. I kiss your cheek

until you bleed.
And your clawing hands
plotting the veins, clotting my life.
Why would I lie?

My trust, trodden on,
muddy from your footprints alone.
Ripped into a thousand
pieces, blowing

in the wind. Your evil
eyes, drinking your wine.
It's here, why, why would I
lie?
©2005-2009 ~lemonlust
:iconlemonlust:

Author's Comments

The breaking of trust,

and the dis-trust that follows

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:iconserenata:
Oh, that is a marvelous poem! I simply loathe lying! You conveyed the feeling of anger and confusion quite accurately. Nice job!
:iconwolft67:
Your words convey powerful emotions. Good use of the english language. Very vivid imagery. I could really invoke what you say. The theme is so universal, yet you deal with this so uniquely. Keep writing.

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"I did what I knew. When I knew better, I did better." - Maya Angelou

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:iconlemonlust:
wow. thanks. yer, I was pretty angry.

Thankyou for your comment :blowkiss:
:iconlemonlust:
Thankyou so much for your compliments, and I promise I will continue to write :nod:
:iconsalvationforsanity:
This one gave me goosebumps. Short, "sweet", and very to the point. I like it a lot. I'll have to read more... -smiles-

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
:iconlemonlust:
Thankyou so much :nod: go ahaead and read all you want.

I shall do the same in your gallery. :+devwatch:

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| You can squeeze my lemon baby | Juice runs down my legs |

| My Photography | =sugarporcelain | :lemon:
:iconsalvationforsanity:
LOL! Thank you very much! I shall counter that move by adding you as well! Ha! lolol

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
:iconyetizor:
Very nice.

Lying is the suxxor.

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Dead Account
:iconlemonlust:
suxxor??????>


Thankyou :nod:

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| You can squeeze my lemon baby | Juice runs down my legs |

| My Photography | =sugarporcelain | :lemon:

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